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Subject: ....MOON.... Wed May 09, 2012 1:57 pm
She shines brightly as I dance underneath Her
She comforts me when I feel alone
She has presence even as a Crescent
She fills the night skies with joy
She gives the dogs something to howl at
She glows as my sons dance under her fertile rays
She creates magic for me to use
She is there when my cats yowl their songs at night
She is the Moon
A little ode I was thinking up while watching the Super Moon.
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Subject: Re: ....MOON.... Thu May 10, 2012 11:11 am
beautiful.
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Subject: Re: ....MOON.... Thu May 10, 2012 12:57 pm
Thank you. I had to really think this one out as I didn't want it to sound corny.
Poetry can be hard!
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Subject: Re: ....MOON.... Thu May 10, 2012 9:27 pm
Two of my favorites are Sylvia Plath and Emily Dickinson
Both morbid the poem "Lady Lazerous" is one of my favorite. And another by Dickinson about death also the fly or something as the name escapes me are worded perfect. You would like them. They inspire greatly.
Plath should have been a teacher but depression killed her dreams.
Still reading her prose can be a great teacher. I've always been inspired by lyrics to songs, which is poetry too.
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